励学益研网

2025高考英语议论文写作如何冲刺高分?

核心结构:三段论

高考英语议论文通常采用“总-分-总”的三段论结构,清晰明了,便于阅卷老师快速抓住要点。

2025高考英语议论文写作如何冲刺高分?-图1

第一段:引言段

目标: 引入话题,表明观点,提出文章中心论点。

结构公式: 背景句 + 引入话题 + 我的观点

  1. 背景句:

    • 作用: 宏观地描述与话题相关的社会现象或普遍认知,为引出话题做铺垫。
    • 技巧: 使用“With the development of...”, “Nowadays, ... has become a hot topic.”等句型。
    • 示例: With the rapid development of technology, the internet has become an indispensable part of our daily life. (随着科技的快速发展,互联网已成为我们日常生活中不可或缺的一部分。)
  2. 引入话题:

    • 作用: 具体点明文章要讨论的问题。
    • 技巧: 直接陈述问题,或使用提问的方式引出。
    • 示例: However, a heated debate has arisen as to whether students should be allowed to use smartphones in the classroom. (关于是否应该允许学生在课堂上使用智能手机,一场激烈的辩论已经展开。)
  3. 我的观点:

    • 作用: 清晰、明确地亮出你的立场,这是全文的“文眼”。
    • 技巧: 使用 I firmly believe that..., From my perspective,..., As far as I am concerned,... 等表达。
    • 示例: From my perspective, although smartphones can be useful tools, they should be strictly prohibited in the classroom to ensure an effective learning environment. (在我看来,尽管智能手机可以是有用的工具,但为了保证有效的学习环境,应严格禁止在课堂使用。)

第二段:主体段

目标:2-3个不同角度论证你的观点,提供充分的理由和论据。

结构公式: 分论点句 + 解释/举例 + 小结

  • 每个分论点自成一体,构成一个“观点-解释-例子”的完整逻辑链。
  1. 分论点句:

    • 作用: 清晰地陈述本段的核心论点。
    • 技巧: 使用 First and foremost,..., In addition,..., Last but not least,..., On the one hand,... 等连接词。
    • 示例: First and foremost, smartphones can be a major distraction for students. (智能手机会成为学生的一大干扰。)
  2. 解释/举例:

    • 作用: 详细阐述为什么你的分论点是正确的,并用具体的例子来支撑。
    • 技巧: 解释原因,引用数据、名人名言,或讲述个人经历/社会现象。
    • 示例: Instead of focusing on the teacher's lecture, students might be tempted to check social media, play games, or send messages. For instance, a recent survey shows that nearly 60% of students admit to using their phones for non-academic purposes during class, which significantly hinders their academic performance. (学生们可能会被诱惑去刷社交媒体、玩游戏或发信息,而不是专注于老师的讲课,最近的一项调查显示,近60%的学生承认在课堂上用手机进行与学习无关的活动,这严重阻碍了他们的学业表现。)
  3. 小结:

    • 作用: 重申本段分论点,强化论证。
    • 技巧: 可以用一个简单的句子总结。
    • 示例: Therefore, banning smartphones in class is crucial for maintaining students' concentration. (在课堂上禁止智能手机对于保持学生的专注至关重要。)
  • 重复上述结构,阐述第二个、第三个分论点。

第三段:结论段

目标: 总结全文,重申观点,并提出建议或展望未来。

结构公式: 重申观点 + 总结论据 + 展望/建议

  1. 重申观点:

    • 作用: 用不同的措辞再次强调你的中心论点,与首段形成呼应。
    • 技巧: 切忌简单重复首句,可以使用 In conclusion, ..., To sum up, ..., All in all, ... 等开头。
    • 示例: In conclusion, while smartphones have their merits, their negative impacts on classroom learning are undeniable. (尽管智能手机有其优点,但它们对课堂学习的负面影响是不可否认的。)
  2. 总结论据:

    • 作用: 简要回顾主体段的分论点。
    • 技巧: 用一两句话概括。
    • 示例: They distract students, hinder face-to-face communication, and can even lead to academic dishonesty. (它们会分散学生注意力,阻碍面对面交流,甚至可能导致学术不端行为。)
  3. 展望/建议:

    • 作用: 提出解决方案、发出呼吁或对未来进行展望,使文章立意更高。
    • 技巧: 使用 It is high time that we..., We should..., Only in this way can we... 等句型。
    • 示例: It is high time that we took effective measures to regulate the use of technology in education, ensuring that it serves as a helpful aid rather than a disruptive element. (是我们采取有效措施规范教育中技术使用的时候了,确保它成为有益的助手,而非干扰因素。)

高分词汇与句型

高分替换词

普通词汇 高分替换词
think believe, argue, claim, maintain, hold the view that
important crucial, vital, significant, essential, indispensable
good beneficial, advantageous, positive
bad harmful, detrimental, negative, adverse
many a host of, a multitude of, a number of, numerous
more and more increasingly, growing numbers of
because of due to, owing to, attributable to, as a result of
so therefore, thus, consequently, hence, accordingly
first To begin with, To start with, First and foremost
second Furthermore, Moreover, In addition, Besides
finally Last but not least, Above all

高分句型

  • 倒装句:
    • Only in this way can we solve this problem. (只有这样我们才能解决这个问题。)
    • Not only should we study hard, but we should also learn to cooperate with others. (我们不仅要努力学习,还要学会与人合作。)
  • 强调句:
    • It is the education that plays a vital role in shaping a person's future. (正是教育在塑造一个人的未来中起着至关重要的作用。)
    • It was because of his hard work that he achieved success. (正是因为他的努力,他才取得了成功。)
  • 状语从句:
    • 让步状语: Although online learning is convenient, it cannot replace the interaction of a traditional classroom. (尽管在线学习很方便,但它无法取代传统课堂的互动。)
    • 原因状语: As the population ages, the problem of supporting the elderly has become increasingly prominent. (随着人口老龄化,养老问题日益突出。)
    • 目的状语: Students should work hard so that they can get into their ideal universities. (学生们应该努力学习,以便能进入理想的大学。)
  • 非谓语动词:
    • Faced with such a challenge, we should remain optimistic. (面对这样的挑战,我们应该保持乐观。)
    • Seeing is believing. (眼见为实。)

审题技巧

后,不要急于动笔,先花1-2分钟审题。

  1. 圈出关键词: 找出题目中的核心名词和动词。
    • Should students be allowed to choose their own teachers?
    • 关键词:students, choose, teachers
  2. 明确文体: 题目通常会明确要求你“谈谈你的看法”、“给出你的观点”等,这表明是议论文。
  3. 确定立场: 思考你支持还是反对,或者部分同意部分反对,选择一个你最有话可说、论据最充分的立场。切忌骑墙!
  4. 头脑风暴: 在草稿纸上快速写下能想到的所有支持你观点的理由和例子。

范文解析

** Some people believe that failure is the mother of success. Do you agree or disagree?


范文分析:

**第一段:引

分享:
扫描分享到社交APP
上一篇
下一篇